Devious Journal Entry

Because of reasons such as "I gots new Mistakes".

Victims:
Madigan Cora Hightop
Rowan Keith Inspector-Matthews
Inochitori Hatsune
Dorian
Zetta Scarlett Minamimoto
Bianka "Echo" Scarlet
Hero Theodore Clock

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie (Vampire/shinigami hybrid.)
[] They are physically strong
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color (Rowan has one black eye and one green eye, Dorian has black scleras, Bianka has yellow eyes, and Hero has grey eyes.)
[ ] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color (She used to be able to do this. They're just green now, though.)
[] They have wings (They're tiny wings, though.)
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal (Or just really slow-aging.)
[ ] (If a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (If a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc (Cryokinetic? Whatever. Point is, he has ice powers.)
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (Zetta can see into the UG, and Bianka can read minds.)
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family (The Beldam is pretty well-off, what with ruling her own world and all, and the Scarlets are loaded.)
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents (Both of Ino's parents died, and while Dorian's father is still alive, he's kind of a bit fucked right now.)
[] They ran away from home (It wasn't officially "running away" until recently, though.)
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s (She was just a baby when it happened, but when Madotsuki jumped to her death, she saw her fall past the window next to her crib.)
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (Part Beldam, ice fairy/robot hybrid, part Reaper, and vampire/shinigami hybrid, respectively.)
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends (She is friends with everyone, and he has one borderline friend.)
[ ] They are emo/cutesy (This one always baffled me. I mean, really. Seems a bit subjective.)
[] They look much younger/older than they really are. (He's in his late 60s-early 70s but looks 13, because youkai age funny, and she's 5 but looks 17 because clones age funny.)
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit.
[] They have a mental disorder (He has MPD, and I don't know what the hell is up with her.)
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho (Just a little.)
[] They have multiple personalities (It's not quite as...obvious as it is with Madigan, though. Mostly because it's legit MPD.)
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (She was born on Christmas.)
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element (Ice.)
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain 'label' ("Scientist" and "Japanese high school girl", respectively.)
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (This wouldn't be the case among the Mistakes, but where he lives humans are generally treated with distrust and fear because of what his father is doing.)
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type (It's black.)
[ ] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (He really doesn't like it when people take the idea of cannibalism in stride [personal squick of his; long story], and she flips the fuck out when she's around someone as fucked-up as, say, Inochitori.)
[] They are from a different country to where they live (Dorian and Bianka are from Gensokyo, and Ino and Zetta are from Japan.)
[] They are very mysterious/dark (He's a broody bastard, and she's basically a constant enigma.)
[] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: singers, which sucks for her because she's mute.)
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (Rowan's labcoat, Zetta's glasses, Bianka's bells, and Hero's fedora.)
[ ] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (He's albino, she's mute.)
[ ] They have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia (Although she may not actually need sleep at all. I'm not sure.)

Overall points:

Madigan: 9
Rowan: 13
Inochitori: 15
Dorian: 9
Zetta: 10
Bianka: 11
Hero: 7

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions:

Rowan: -2
Dorian: -1

Final score:

Madigan: 9
Rowan: 11
Inochitori: 15
Dorian: 8
Zetta: 10
Bianka: 11
Hero: 7

< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue
Stop being Mary Sue! D:<

They all got balanced. Nicht schlect. Although I may need to tone down Ino a bit.